SkywardRiver Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 My first attempt at a trailer. Let me know what I can improve on. Â Â Â Kickstarter and Greenlight coming soon Zetasis, Xeno, Henry and 3 others 6
Voltramas Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Love it! I especially love how you had that portion where the player was riding the bird as a mount! I have been wondering how you could do almost a taxi system like in WoW to fly from one place to another. Â Good work!! SkywardRiver 1
James Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Pretty good job on a first time trailer maybe some faster paced music could improve it and more headings for what you are showing off? SkywardRiver 1
Guest SherwiN Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Let me give you a honest opinion, this might give you an idea on how to improve it  first of all, half of your trailer just show off your maps next stuffs is your just showing a video of you beating up some mobs, getting resource etc.. it does show us what kind of game play it is but.. what i dislike on your trailer is that you didn't use a text at all.. the music u use make it boring and not exciting, i don't mean to say it badly but without someone saying this, your trailer won't improve at all..  give your trailer an impact, also show us some storylines.
Bradley Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Pretty nice work. I like it. Agoraphobic and SkywardRiver 2
Ambard Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Very well done. Not to long. To the point. Makes me want to play. SkywardRiver 1
SkywardRiver Posted January 31, 2017 Author Posted January 31, 2017 Thank you all Bradley and Henry 2
Bradley Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 40 minutes ago, SkywardRiver said: Thank you all The game has come a long way since I first registered, Sky. You and @Zetasis have got a fantastic game here and I honestly hope you guys get what you're looking for. So keep it up! Zetasis and SkywardRiver 2
Ariel Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7fejPee35-g https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqf85YF1aaI NICE! I really like the idea of this game! Well I have some experince with trailers of MapleStory Server back in the days: https://youtu.be/7fejPee35-g https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqf85YF1aaI  If they look cool I can help you ^^ SkywardRiver 1
Henry Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Quote My first attempt at a trailer. Let me know what I can improve on. Â Kickstarter and Greenlight coming soon Good stuff I would recommend making a short 30 second summarized version as well Game looks great! SkywardRiver 1
Irij Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 The combat looks so incredibly slow and boring.. Only problem with these types of engines.
SkywardRiver Posted January 31, 2017 Author Posted January 31, 2017 I'm currently looking into ways to make the combat more action oriented and enjoyable.
Refur Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 I think it's a good first trailer, I really hope to test the game or see more about the dynamic. Regards
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