Ah, when I said edit, I meant more or less the red outlines showing me how to improve.
Also that diagram is pretty nifty, Thanks for that I will try and get to it tomorrow or today sometime but work is in the way a lot.
I had it animated previously and that's how I was fixing it up little by little but it was just making me mad so I threw it to the side for now, to make my time a little more productive it's more or less a place holder as it is. I am thinking of changing the style all together.
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you can actually follow the work progress I did with the side view here on pixelation to show how much it HAS improved more or less it's still odd looking but hey it works for now.
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